Mariana Trench, Challengers Deep Movie!!

On my recent post I posted my poster of my movie. Now I am publishing my movie of the Challenger's Deep. I am proud that I worked with Axle and Vann because I learnt something new about the Mariana Trench. Please watch our movie 🎥. Please leave a comment on my post. I hope you like my movie. Bye!! 

Challenger Deep

This post is about the film festival, we made a film that is called the Mariana Trench. In our group is Vann, Axle and Brielle. I think that we are doing very good on our film. I was so exited because we are nearly finished our Mariana Trench movie. Please come to watch our movie at 12 PM at 22 September 2016 in the HPS (Hornby Primary School) Hall. Everybody is Invited so please come to watch our movie. Bye!!

My Vocabulary Word Wall!

So this week we are learning to figure out the words that we don't know. We went into our Independent Tasks then we have to do at least 4 of the tasks. We need to pick a word that we don't quite understand from the book.
I hope you like my Vocabulary Word Wall. Bye!!

The Destroyed Earth Final Draft

W.A.L.T Write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

We have been looking at a video of a Chimp sent to space. A couple of weeks ago I posted my First Draft of my story. Now I have posted my Final Draft. I have took a long very time to write this story. I hope you like my story please comment if I could do something better. Bye!

My Vocabulary Word Wall!

So this week we are learning to figure out the words that we don't know. We went into our Independent Tasks then we have to do at least 4 of the tasks. We need to pick a word that we don't quite understand from the book.
I hope you like my Vocabulary Word Wall. Bye!!

The Big Idea of Jeff Williams has been the longest time in space

The Big idea

Read the article and write down the key words or phrases that answer the following questions.

Who?	Jeff Williams from NASA
What?	An Astronaut Breaks Record
Where?	In Space
When?	September 9, 2016
Why?	Jeff Williams has broken the record for the longest time in space.
How?	Jeff has been 534 days in space and he has hold the American Record for the longest time in space.

Write three sentences explaining what the article was about

Jeff Williams went to space for 534 days and broken the record for the longest time in space.

The Big Idea of NASA Test World’s Biggest Rocket

The Big idea

Read the article and write down the key words or phrases that answer the following questions.

Who?	NASA
What?	NASA Test World’s Biggest Rocket
Where?	American Desert
When?	12 August, 2016
Why?	Because they had never tested one that big before.
How?	They tested the Rocket

Write three sentences explaining what the article was about

NASA has tested it is the world’s biggest rocket. The tested in American Desert (America). The capture of the video was to bright because the flames of the fuel of the rocket.

Divide with Remainders using Larger Numbers

Divide with Remainders

This week for maths we are learning to Divide with Remainders. Watch this video for more information what is Divide with Remainders is.

I found these easy ways to answer these questions. You can use this method when it is like 25 ÷ 3 =

First Draft of The Destroyed Earth

We have been looking at a video of a Chimp sent to space. A couple of weeks ago I posted my Space Chimp planning. Now I have posted my first draft. Next time I might post my second draft of my story and next time I will improve some of my punctuation. I have took a long time to write this story. I hope you like my story please comment if I done something wrong. Bye!

W.A.L.T write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

The Destroyed Earth

First Draft

Ring, Ring, Ring. The alarm rang in my ear so loud as a three big elephant stomping in my house. Today is the day to go to space, first ring Max to tell that I am dressed up and meet me outside my house, he said to pick me up at 7:00.

But he came 5 minutes early because it was a long way to go to the NASA Space Station. When we reached there it was the time to go to space and finish Max’s Bosses Challenge. This is the day that my dream is going to be true, I can go to space and see the other planets. I took a photo of Max and I because I can’t forget him. 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Ka! Boom! Bang!

My seat pulled back so fast that I yelled.

“Help me!”

So loud that Max could hear it. The fast flash pick up speed was terrifying.

“Yes!”

The space capsule was launched. After 8 minutes I reached to the Earth’s atmosphere. The green communication button flashed out and pressed, then I heard a tiny rackle then I heard Max’s Boss's voice.

“Hi (Crr) Ja..ck, good (Crr) lu.ck (Crrr) fo.r y..our t.r.ip.”

(Crrrr). Controlnet disconnected. Error! Error!  Boom!       Bang! This is my last day of my life, I’m gone! I closed my eyes and slowly opened my eyes and the beautiful thing I have ever seen the Sparkly, Shiney, Stars. I was to be put in comma for 65 years. When chimpanzee’s lifespan is for 50 years.

65 Years later…

I woke up in some blurry vision.

“Where am I? Where is everybody?”

Then I saw that I have been in space for 23725 Days, 22 Hours, 58 Minutes and 37 Seconds in space, so it is 2026! I saw something familiar, my memory is coming back! My home planet Earth.

“I am coming Max!”

The rocket zoomed back to earth, the speedy, zommy rocket. I used the parachute land. Then…

Terra firma!

I was finally landed. Ouch! I fell to the ground so hard as a 7 Kg weight fell on me. Then I saw broken buildings, broken houses and broken trees.

“Why did you do this humans? I think I should rip and throw away this photo.”

Then I heard a voice coming from the demolished building. I ran to level 5 and I saw some Aliens talking in there language. Then one of the Alien saw me listening to their talking.

“Who are you!”

said the Alien in a angry voice.

“I’m Jack the space chimp, where is everybody, where is Max?”

“They are gone, everybody is gone even Max is gone. Now I am the king of the world and you are my servant like the other chimpanzees.”

“W..wh..why did you do this?”

“Why are you asking to much questions like my friend?!”

“Because I miss them. So what can I do?!”

Then he got angry so angry that he pressed the emergency button and called his army to attack him. So I ran so fast as I could, but the Aliens traped me around.

Thwack!!

I felt the sharp arrow shot me on the chest.

“Sorry, Max, Sorry.” It was 4:45 AM. Then I woke up from my bed.

“Wh..ere a.m I?” I was shocked from that dream.

“C'mon Jack, it’s time to go to space.”

“Noooooooo, I don’t want to go to space, it’s horrible.”

Division in Parts

This week for maths we are learning to use Division in Parts. Watch this video for more information what Division in Parts is.

I found these easy ways to answer these questions. You can use this method when it is like 84 ÷ 4 =

My 21 Times Tables

This is my presentation of my 21 Times Tables.

My Vocabulary Word Wall

So this week we are learning to figure out the words that we don't know. We went into our Independent Tasks then we have to do at least 4 of the tasks. We need to pick a word that we don't quite understand from the book. I hope you like my Vocabulary Word Wall. Bye!!

How to use Grid Method Part 2

This week for maths we are learning to use Grid Multiplication. Watch this video for more information what is Grid Multiplication is.

I found these easy ways to answer these questions. You can use this method when it is like eg: 54 x 20=

How to use Grid Method

This week for maths we are learning to use Grid Multiplication. Watch this video for more information what is Grid Multiplication is.

I found these easy ways to answer these questions. You can use this method when it is like eg: 54 x 20=

15 Times Tables

This is my presentation of my 15 Times Tables. 

My Space Chimp Planning

This is my Space Chimp Planning.