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Friday, September 9, 2016

The Destroyed Earth Final Draft

W.A.L.T Write a narrative

Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
  • The title is suitable for the text.
  • The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
  • The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
  • The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
  • Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

We have been looking at a video of a Chimp sent to space. A couple of weeks ago I posted my First Draft of my story. Now I have posted my Final Draft. I have took a long very time to write this story. I hope you like my story please comment if I could do something better. Bye!